http://iklin.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] iklin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] yurrikon 2012-08-22 01:05 pm (UTC)

Неплохо, хотя я бы выкинул вторую строфу и что-нибудь сделал с "несотворённой расой".
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